Writing
Thank you, Debbie for featuring me
on your website. There are almost as many styles of writing as there are
authors, but if you ask authors what you should write, most of them will say,
write what you know. While there's a certain amount of truth to
that statement, I had one thought when I was given such advice. A person can
always research what they don't know, especially in this day and age.
Technology makes research so much easier than it was years ago.
In my book, For Mercy's Sake, I needed to know how long a person could remain alive
while buried in a coffin. That wasn't something I had personal knowledge of. I
did a little research and placed my unwilling (fictional) heroine in the box,
covered her with dirt, and waited. It was a good thing the hero found her in
time. It did take a while for her to speak to me after those scenes were
written.
In essence, I did write what I
learned, so in a sense, I did write what I knew. However, I didn't allow lack
of knowledge on a topic prevent me from writing a climactic scene.
But more important then facts and
authenticity, to me anyway, is to write what you enjoy. When writing a book of
any length, you will spend a lot of time with your characters and the life you
are giving them to live. If you are miserable while writing, it will show in
your story. Enjoy being with them. But beware, the characters will argue with
you, and boy, can they be stubborn.
In the first book of my Rebels,
Rakes, and Rogues Series, Her Scottish Rogue, I introduced a minor
character named Baron Lacey. My plan for him was to be a horrible person
through and through. He had other ideas. And after he and I came to terms with
his storyline, it was decided that Baron needed to tell his own story. A reason
behind the man, if you will. So, His Rebellious Heart, the second book
in the Rebels, Rakes, and Rogues Series was born. Sometimes it's
annoying when the characters are right. At least, Baron lets me take credit for
his existance. ;)
Beck Montgomery,
from Her Scottish Rogue in the Rebels, Rakes, and Rogues Series
was as cantankerous a man as they come. He was grumpy from our first meeting.
Even when I introduced Wren, our heroine for this story, he had a sour
disposition. That's all right. Wren knew how to break the ice with him. And
when she did, well, I'll just say he was much easier to talk with.
When writing
your story, let your characters and the lives they lead become real. Don't
worry about book length or what the latest literary trend is. Spend time with
your characters, enjoy being with them, and write what happens when you are
with them. When you've done that, you will have characters and a story that
other people will want to spend time with. And trust me, all of you, the author, the characters, and
the readers will have a much more satisfying experience because of it.
If you would like to see how Beck warmed up to Wren, or how charming Baron truely is, I am having a giveaway. The winner will have their choice of Her Scottish Rogue or His Rebellious Heart. Both of these books are from the Rebels, Rakes, and Rogues Series. Of course, if you'd like to see how much of a close call Anna had escaping death while buried alive, you can choose, For Mercy's Sake. The giveaway is for an e-copy Open Internatioanlly
Blurb
Wren Taggart is no lady. Her life consists of kitchen duties at Newcastle Inn. Mistaken for Lady Anne, the illegitimate daughter of England's Prince Regent, she is kidnapped and forced to marry a man who cares nothing for her or for Britain. Deception and lies is the only way for her to return home. But when her heart softens toward her new husband, she fears she will lose more than the life she's known.
Scottish born, Beckett Montgomery is no lord. The bastard son of a nobleman, he despises everyone and everything British. To restore a family name and fortune he doesn't want, he must convince all of Longton nobility and England's Prince Regent that he is the honorable Sir Lacey, and the rightful heir to Longton Castle.
When a murderer targets women who bear a resemblance to Wren, Beck must choose between returning home to Scotland and protecting the woman he's come to love.
Read an excerpt:
Beck glared first at his wife and then his brother. Wren had rushed past
the door to the study only moments ago, not stopping when he'd called her name.
He'd watched her from the window to see where she ran in such a rush. Baron's
horse was hitched to the front of the barn and he looked as though he prepared
to leave without saying a word to anyone. Did Wren intend to have him escort
her back to Newcastle?
"Will neither of you answer my
question?" Beck demanded again.
Baron flicked a glance from Beck to Wren
and then shrugged.
"Your lovely wife and I were having a
small chat. Isn't that right, Lady Anne? Now that we're finished, I'll be on my
way." He walked to a table and began tossing things from the surface.
"Where's my whisky bottle?" His body straightened and his eyes lit
up. He reached his hand and pulled a bottle from behind a pile of soiled rags.
"Ah. Tis not whisky, but rum. Even better. A gentleman's drink." He
pulled the stopper from the opening and tipped the bottle. Amber liquid spilled
into his mouth and splashed down his chin. Finished, he wiped the back of his
hand across his lips.
"Ah, my manners." He rubbed the
opening with the palm of his hand and then shot his arm toward Wren.
"Ladies first."
Beck swung his arm wide. The cracking blow
caught Baron under his chin. The rum bottle soared into the air, breaking
against the wall. Beck didn't wait for him to steady himself. He threw himself
forward, catching his brother around the neck, and dragging him to the floor.
"You had everything, you spoilt whelp
of a jackal, and you do na ken enough to treat a lady with respect," Beck
ground through his teeth. He hauled Baron to his feet, and steadied him for
another blow.
Baron punched upward, his fists striking
under Beck's ribs, first with one hand and then the other. Beck's breath rushed
from his lungs, and he doubled over. Wheezing, he watched for the next blow.
"Spoilt whelp, am I? You stinking,
Scottish bas––"
Already bent forward, Beck didn't wait for
him to finish his slur. He rushed forward, hitting his brother low in the gut
and shoving him backward. Knocking him over a feed bale, the two men soared
through the air, tumbling backward and then rolling into an empty stall. Beck
scrambled to his feet and sat atop his sibling. He swung his arms, aiming for
anything solid. Muscular legs wrapped around his head, hauling him backward.
Baron twisted out from under him, sprang to his feet, and flew at him, his
hands spread wide.
Movement silhouetted the door opening, and
Beck glanced over his brother's shoulder and then charged forward. Sir Lacey
stood next to Wren, calmly taking in his sons' behaviors. A slight flicker of
approval lit his da's face. Did he enjoy seeing his offspring at each other's
throats? If he did, he would...
A wooden crate shattered across Beck's
side. He stumbled sideways, grunting loudly.
"What the… are your fists no good
enough for you, whelp? You have to pick up a weapon?" Beck asked,
regaining his balance.
"Sir Lacey, you must stop them.
They'll kill each other," Wren shouted from the front of the barn.
Why dinna she return to the castle? A
bonnie brawl wasna anything for a lass to witness, and God knew he needed to
work off his anger. He'd become enraged thinking Wren might leave him. What
better way to take out his angst then with a friendly scrap with his brother?
Beck turned his gaze to Baron. His brother
was hunched forward, and clutching his side. His cheek was beginning to swell,
and a dark circle formed under his eye. Other than the way he held his hand, he
looked ready for a second round of fisticuffs. A crooked smile formed beneath
his glare. He launched himself forward, and Beck extended his arm, flattening
his brother's nose. Dazed, Baron's eyes crossed and his body swayed like a hawk
in a windstorm. Blood flowed down his face as he reached for a nearby wall. He
touched his hand to his lip and looked at the blood.
"Damn barbarian," he sneered. He
wiped the red liquid on his pant leg. "My nose is my best feature. Now
you've broken it."
"The break gives you character,
something you sorely need," Beck sneered.
"You've hated me your entire
life." Baron swung a rake handle, its aim in line with Beck's head. Beck's
eyes widened, and he ducked.
"And with good cause, you arrogant
fop. You had everything, and you squandered it all. You care for nothing but
yourself. Swine."
Beck caught Baron in the chest and shoved
him against the wall. Baron drew his knee up, hard and fast, catching Beck
between the legs. His body jerked, and he moaned. Holding to his groin, he fell
to the floor.
"It's mine to squander," Baron
shouted. He stood over Beck, breathing hard, but momentarily out of harm's way.
"Or is that why you're here? You're interested in securing an
inheritance."
He stomped past Beck. Nearly out of reach,
Beck's arm shot sideways, and he grabbed Baron's ankle, wrenching his brother's
leg backward. Baron flapped his arms, searching for something to break his
fall, but thudded to the ground. Dust and hay wafted up around them. On hands
and knees, Beck scurried up to him. He grabbed hold of his shirt, yanked his
body up, and glared down at him.
"You have nothing I want, you or Sir
Lacey. The only reason I'm here is to clean up your mess, whelp."
"That's too bad," Baron said,
dangling from his brother's grasp. "Because I want something from
you."
Beck paused, and then shoved Baron back on
the ground. He rested his hand on his thigh. Breathing heavily, he glanced to
his side. His da and Wren no longer waited at the door. It was good that they'd
left. With the direction the skirmish seemed to be taking, it might be wise
that neither of them heard what they discussed.
He looked through the hay-infused air to
his brother. His fight was more than an opportunity to work off spent up
tension. Although he didn't know what Baron wanted, he doubted he'd be willing
to give him anything.
"What could I possibly have that
would mean anything to you? You were raised with everything you wanted. You
were respected by all your peers. I worked, and fought, for the little respect
I could force out of people. Only to later learn that it was fear that I saw in
their faces, not regard. They never saw me as anything more than a bastard. So
I ask you again, brother. What could I possibly have to give you envy?"
Beck fell to his backside and leaned
against the front of a stall. Baron watched him closely, and then pushed himself
to a seated position.
"I want the one thing I could never
have," Baron said. "My father's love."
Beck's chest heaved and then relaxed. He
lifted his gaze. Dark brown hair covered his eyes.
Baron pushed himself opposite of Beck and
leaned against an inside wall. "Our father provided me with a castle to
live in, servants to tend to my every whim, money to buy everything I
wanted." He threw his hands forward, pushing away his explanation.
"You have no idea what it's like to try to win a person's favor, knowing
all the while you were being compared to. . . you." Baron drew his legs up
and rested his arms on his knees. "Father never said it, but in his eyes,
I could see him weigh my measure against yours, and always, in the balance was
you. All my efforts were for naught. I can't fight a ghost, brother, and you
weren't here for me to best. He may have given me everything, but you were the
son he wanted, the son I could never be."
Beck crawled to his feet, and then offered
his hand to Baron. "Whether we like it or no, we're more alike than either
of us want to admit."
"But I'm better looking," Baron
said, standing to his feet.
"You were better looking," Beck
said, swatting Baron's broken nose.
"Ow," Baron howled. "Did
you have to hit me square in the face?"
"I thought you'd duck."
Both men laughed. Beck wrapped his arm
around Baron's shoulders. "Do na forget, Sir Lacey," Beck said,
teasing the younger man. "I'm a barbarian, but you envy me."
Baron looked up at him, admiration beaming
upward. "Not any more. Now, I respect you."
Beck glared first at his wife and then his brother. Wren had rushed past
the door to the study only moments ago, not stopping when he'd called her name.
He'd watched her from the window to see where she ran in such a rush. Baron's
horse was hitched to the front of the barn and he looked as though he prepared
to leave without saying a word to anyone. Did Wren intend to have him escort
her back to Newcastle?
"Will neither of you answer my
question?" Beck demanded again.
Baron flicked a glance from Beck to Wren
and then shrugged.
"Your lovely wife and I were having a
small chat. Isn't that right, Lady Anne? Now that we're finished, I'll be on my
way." He walked to a table and began tossing things from the surface.
"Where's my whisky bottle?" His body straightened and his eyes lit
up. He reached his hand and pulled a bottle from behind a pile of soiled rags.
"Ah. Tis not whisky, but rum. Even better. A gentleman's drink." He
pulled the stopper from the opening and tipped the bottle. Amber liquid spilled
into his mouth and splashed down his chin. Finished, he wiped the back of his
hand across his lips.
"Ah, my manners." He rubbed the
opening with the palm of his hand and then shot his arm toward Wren.
"Ladies first."
Beck swung his arm wide. The cracking blow
caught Baron under his chin. The rum bottle soared into the air, breaking
against the wall. Beck didn't wait for him to steady himself. He threw himself
forward, catching his brother around the neck, and dragging him to the floor.
"You had everything, you spoilt whelp
of a jackal, and you do na ken enough to treat a lady with respect," Beck
ground through his teeth. He hauled Baron to his feet, and steadied him for
another blow.
Baron punched upward, his fists striking
under Beck's ribs, first with one hand and then the other. Beck's breath rushed
from his lungs, and he doubled over. Wheezing, he watched for the next blow.
"Spoilt whelp, am I? You stinking,
Scottish bas––"
Already bent forward, Beck didn't wait for
him to finish his slur. He rushed forward, hitting his brother low in the gut
and shoving him backward. Knocking him over a feed bale, the two men soared
through the air, tumbling backward and then rolling into an empty stall. Beck
scrambled to his feet and sat atop his sibling. He swung his arms, aiming for
anything solid. Muscular legs wrapped around his head, hauling him backward.
Baron twisted out from under him, sprang to his feet, and flew at him, his
hands spread wide.
Movement silhouetted the door opening, and
Beck glanced over his brother's shoulder and then charged forward. Sir Lacey
stood next to Wren, calmly taking in his sons' behaviors. A slight flicker of
approval lit his da's face. Did he enjoy seeing his offspring at each other's
throats? If he did, he would...
A wooden crate shattered across Beck's
side. He stumbled sideways, grunting loudly.
"What the… are your fists no good
enough for you, whelp? You have to pick up a weapon?" Beck asked,
regaining his balance.
"Sir Lacey, you must stop them.
They'll kill each other," Wren shouted from the front of the barn.
Why dinna she return to the castle? A
bonnie brawl wasna anything for a lass to witness, and God knew he needed to
work off his anger. He'd become enraged thinking Wren might leave him. What
better way to take out his angst then with a friendly scrap with his brother?
Beck turned his gaze to Baron. His brother
was hunched forward, and clutching his side. His cheek was beginning to swell,
and a dark circle formed under his eye. Other than the way he held his hand, he
looked ready for a second round of fisticuffs. A crooked smile formed beneath
his glare. He launched himself forward, and Beck extended his arm, flattening
his brother's nose. Dazed, Baron's eyes crossed and his body swayed like a hawk
in a windstorm. Blood flowed down his face as he reached for a nearby wall. He
touched his hand to his lip and looked at the blood.
"Damn barbarian," he sneered. He
wiped the red liquid on his pant leg. "My nose is my best feature. Now
you've broken it."
"The break gives you character,
something you sorely need," Beck sneered.
"You've hated me your entire
life." Baron swung a rake handle, its aim in line with Beck's head. Beck's
eyes widened, and he ducked.
"And with good cause, you arrogant
fop. You had everything, and you squandered it all. You care for nothing but
yourself. Swine."
Beck caught Baron in the chest and shoved
him against the wall. Baron drew his knee up, hard and fast, catching Beck
between the legs. His body jerked, and he moaned. Holding to his groin, he fell
to the floor.
"It's mine to squander," Baron
shouted. He stood over Beck, breathing hard, but momentarily out of harm's way.
"Or is that why you're here? You're interested in securing an
inheritance."
He stomped past Beck. Nearly out of reach,
Beck's arm shot sideways, and he grabbed Baron's ankle, wrenching his brother's
leg backward. Baron flapped his arms, searching for something to break his
fall, but thudded to the ground. Dust and hay wafted up around them. On hands
and knees, Beck scurried up to him. He grabbed hold of his shirt, yanked his
body up, and glared down at him.
"You have nothing I want, you or Sir
Lacey. The only reason I'm here is to clean up your mess, whelp."
"That's too bad," Baron said,
dangling from his brother's grasp. "Because I want something from
you."
Beck paused, and then shoved Baron back on
the ground. He rested his hand on his thigh. Breathing heavily, he glanced to
his side. His da and Wren no longer waited at the door. It was good that they'd
left. With the direction the skirmish seemed to be taking, it might be wise
that neither of them heard what they discussed.
He looked through the hay-infused air to
his brother. His fight was more than an opportunity to work off spent up
tension. Although he didn't know what Baron wanted, he doubted he'd be willing
to give him anything.
"What could I possibly have that
would mean anything to you? You were raised with everything you wanted. You
were respected by all your peers. I worked, and fought, for the little respect
I could force out of people. Only to later learn that it was fear that I saw in
their faces, not regard. They never saw me as anything more than a bastard. So
I ask you again, brother. What could I possibly have to give you envy?"
Beck fell to his backside and leaned
against the front of a stall. Baron watched him closely, and then pushed himself
to a seated position.
"I want the one thing I could never
have," Baron said. "My father's love."
Beck's chest heaved and then relaxed. He
lifted his gaze. Dark brown hair covered his eyes.
Baron pushed himself opposite of Beck and
leaned against an inside wall. "Our father provided me with a castle to
live in, servants to tend to my every whim, money to buy everything I
wanted." He threw his hands forward, pushing away his explanation.
"You have no idea what it's like to try to win a person's favor, knowing
all the while you were being compared to. . . you." Baron drew his legs up
and rested his arms on his knees. "Father never said it, but in his eyes,
I could see him weigh my measure against yours, and always, in the balance was
you. All my efforts were for naught. I can't fight a ghost, brother, and you
weren't here for me to best. He may have given me everything, but you were the
son he wanted, the son I could never be."
Beck crawled to his feet, and then offered
his hand to Baron. "Whether we like it or no, we're more alike than either
of us want to admit."
"But I'm better looking," Baron
said, standing to his feet.
"You were better looking," Beck
said, swatting Baron's broken nose.
"Ow," Baron howled. "Did
you have to hit me square in the face?"
"I thought you'd duck."
Both men laughed. Beck wrapped his arm
around Baron's shoulders. "Do na forget, Sir Lacey," Beck said,
teasing the younger man. "I'm a barbarian, but you envy me."
Baron looked up at him, admiration beaming
upward. "Not any more. Now, I respect you."
Blurb
Sir Baron Lacey lives a life of prominence and position, until he's falsely accused of his fiancée's murder. Unable to claim his title and family estate, he follows a killer's trail from one end of England to another. Lady Ella Baxter always does what is expected of her, except where Baron Lacey is concerned. When she finds the man she loves shot and close to death, her loyalties will be challenged more than ever before.
Tracking a killer was difficult enough for Baron but when Ella becomes the murderer's next target, he must decide what is more at risk, Ella's life or his rebellious heart.
Read an excerpt:
Baron lifted his chin in the direction of
the satisfied customer. "Is that the one?" he asked the proprietor.
The tavern owner glanced over his shoulder
and then continued to wipe the table where Baron sat. "Um-hmm. His name's
Payne Crumley," he answered. He paused and looked Baron straight in the
eyes. His bloodshot glare indicated the intensity in which he spoke.
"I don't want any trouble in here.
Whatever business you have with him, you take it outside." His voice was
gruff when he spoke.
Baron didn't want any trouble either, from
the tavern keeper or the man's patron. But sometimes, in order to acquire what
was needed, he couldn't always guarantee the safety of the surrounding area.
"I'll see what I can do," Baron said.
Ignoring the man's harsh glare, he grabbed
hold of the whiskey bottle and headed toward the door. He didn't need to be
told how to conduct his business. For years, he'd made good on damage he'd been
responsible for. It hadn't been his preference to remodel one establishment
after another, but his generosity had established a bond with a variety of
people who provided him with sensitive information.
He staggered from side to side and
shuffled his feet as he walked. He'd not had anything to drink, but the man
leaving the whore didn't need to know that. Footsteps neared Baron. He'd timed
his departure well, and his body now blocked the exit. Baron stopped moving and
stared down at the floor. He leaned against the doorframe and jiggled one leg.
"...And good whiskey, too." he
said, his words slurred. He turned to the man behind him, and lifted his knee
toward the stranger. "Milksop, does this smell like booze...?"
"What? Move out of my way,
drunk," the man said. He stepped to his left, and tried to side-step
Baron.
Baron spread his arms from his side,
keeping the man in front of him. "There's no need to call names. I just
asked a question."
The man snarled his lip, and shoved his
hand against Baron.
This was the reaction Baron had hoped for.
Without hesitating, he grabbed his attacker's upper arm, and slammed him into
the wall. His opponent's face crushed against the wood, and the man gasped. Not
giving him time to squirm, Baron shoved his shoulder into the center of the
man's back, pressing his weight hard into him.
Baron waved off the barkeep and positioned
his mouth next to the pinned man's ear. "If you don't like my question,
how about a statement? Another woman is dead, and you're involved, Payne
Crumley."
The man's eyes bulged, and his skin paled.
"How do you know my name?"
"Just know that I found you once, and
I can do it again."
Squirming against the wall, the man looked
as though he struggled to keep control of his bodily functions. "I didn't
kill anyone," the man sneered. He pushed backward against Baron's fist.
Baron wrenched the man's arm behind his
back and yanked his hand up to his hairline. "No? But you know where I can
find the man who did. Where is he?"
"I don't know what you're talking
about."
"I think you do, and I'll ask again.
Where is Lacey Macey?" Baron cringed at the use of the name. He'd never
get used to connecting his name with that of the killer.
Baron had been warned he wasn't likely to
get any cooperation from the man. But this was his only lead, and he couldn't
risk another woman being attacked. He yanked his dagger into the open with his
free hand, and held the blade near the wall.
"I have a theory. Would you like to
hear it, Crumley?" He didn't wait for an answer. "If the murderer can
escape the hangman, he might stop killing innocent women."
"You don't know that. Maybe he'll see
himself as invincible and kill even more. He is mad, after all."
"Yes, he is," Baron agreed. The
thought of freeing a murderer was the last thing on his mind, and he had no
intention of letting a madman run loose. His theory was only a means to loosen
Crumley's tongue.
No one needed to remind him of the mental
state of a murderer. Baron had witnessed the carnage first hand. What had
prevented him from reporting what he knew to the authorities was the madman's
identity. The king would do anything to protect his son. Baron turned his
dagger in his hand. Light played along the sharp edge of the blade, sliding
from hilt to tip.
"You've been in the same town as
every woman who's been murdered. It should be fairly easy to convince a judge
you're a murderer."
Crumley's eyes widened further. "That
means nothing. I didn't kill anyone. Didn't you hear me?"
Baron leaned in close to the man's face.
In his mind, he played his final card in a winner take all poker game.
Everything both men owned lay on the table in full view. A game of this
magnitude took skill and courage. Baron may not have a winning hand, but at
least he had his wits to rely on.
"You have to remember," Baron
said, his voice heavy. "Your arrest will stop future murders."
Baron didn't believe the logic to his
words anymore now then when he'd come up with the idea. Still, he was certain
that Payne Crumley knew more than he was willing to share. He'd most likely be
unwilling to tell Baron what he knew, but Baron's aggression might be the
motivation the man needed to expose the killer. If Crumley knew where the
murderer was, chances were, he would warn Macey about Baron. And if Crumley,
like Baron, meant to bring Macey to justice, he might tell Baron what he knew
in a means to escape being arrested for a crime he didn't commit. Either way,
Payne Crumley wasn't leaving without Baron gaining an advantage over Macey.
"I told you to take your business
outside. I'll not have my place busted up," the tavern keeper shouted from
the upstairs balcony.
The business owner's shout was all the
distraction Crumley needed. Shoving his chest away from the wall, he knocked
Baron to the ground, and then raced out the door. Baron fell backward, landing
hard on the floor. He cursed under his breath, but shot to his feet. He'd
bluffed about going to the magistrate, but he couldn't let this man get away
now. His source of information had been adamant that Payne Crumley knew where
to find the murderer.
Bursting through the door, both men raced
into the back alleys and onto the main street. A white shirt billowed in front
of Baron as Crumley weaved his way past several street merchants. A small boy
ran in front of them, breaking the fugitive's stride. Baron closed the distance
between them and reached for the fleeing man's shirt collar. Crumley rounded
the corner, and instead of grabbing cloth, air filled Baron's grasp. He'd
almost had hold of him, and a change of direction had prevented him from
capturing his best chance of bringing a murderer to justice.
The sound of boxes falling to the ground
brought both men up short, and Baron skidded to a stop. He bent forward, his
lungs burning. He could hardly confront the man in front of witnesses. Besides,
from the sound of the commotion, Crumley had crashed into someone who'd had
their hands full. Baron doubted someone would let Crumley race off without
restacking what he'd destroyed.
"What did you call me?" a
feminine voice asked.
Baron's body clenched, and he jerked his
head in the direction of her question.
"Lady Ella," a man said. Crumley
panted as hard as Baron.
Baron inched toward the edge of the
building. He thought he recognized the voice of the woman who'd spoken, but it
was impossible that Ella Baxter was here. She lived in Longton and never
ventured from her home any further than the distance it took to travel to
nearby neighbors. He'd even nicknamed her Mouse because of her meek demeanor.
Pressing himself against the wall, he peered around the corner and looked in
the woman's direction.
Dressed in a tan colored, silk gown with
brown lace trim, a brightly faced woman confronted the man Baron had been
chasing. An assortment of boxes littered the ground around their feet. Baron
could stare at her for hours, but he pulled back to keep from being seen. From
what he could tell, this young woman was Ella, but he could only guess as to
what she was doing here.
"I prefer to be addressed as Lady
Eleanor," she said.
She spoke with an assertiveness he'd never
heard her use before. She'd told Crumley to call her Lady Eleanor. Baron
smiled. He'd always called her Ella, and she'd never objected to his use of the
nickname.
Crumley helped Ella into her coach and
then loaded her packages, one item at a time, in with her. The boxes were small
and could easily be stacked in one pile. Why did he take such care to lift them
individually? Once the last parcel was inside the coach, Crumley took an
extraordinarily long time to take his leave. After a long minute, he closed the
door and disappeared down the street.
Baron waited, debating if he should follow
after him or say hello to Ella. She and Crumley had tried to appear as though
they were strangers. Passersby had not seemed to question the meeting. But for
someone whose life depended on adequately interpreting other people's actions,
not to mention, who also knew Ella, there was more to this unexpected meeting
than one might think. With his decision made, Baron walked up to the coach and
pulled the closed door open.
"We have nothing left to discuss.
I'll meet you on Saturday," Ella said.
"And where shall we meet?" Baron
asked.
Clutching her hands to her chest, Ella
jumped in her seat. Blood drained from her face, and her mouth fell open. He
could hear her heart pounding from where she sat.
"Baron! You recov…Why are you…how did
you…" she said, her eyes darted nervously past him to the street.
"It's good to see you, too,
Ella," he said. Without waiting for an invitation, he climbed into the
coach with her.
Again, her gaze swept the street.
"What are you doing? You can't be here…alone…with me. We have no
chaperone."
She had always been proper and
conservative in her manner, but there was something different about her today.
The dreamy-eyed stare he was used to seeing was missing. Instead of hanging
onto his every word as he'd known her to do, she looked appalled to see him.
Did she expect Crumley to return, or did she indeed look for a chaperone?
"You need to leave, Sir Lacey. My
aunt will be here momentarily."
Five years her elder, Baron had never
thought much of how interested she was in him, but he disliked being dismissed
like an unwanted houseguest.
"Have I done something to offend you,
Lady Ella?" he asked, deliberately using his nickname for her.
Her lip twitched and her cheeks reddened,
but she didn't correct him about the use of her name. "As I said, my
aunt—"
"Eleanor, dear, please open the door.
My hands are full," an older woman said from outside the coach.
Ella rolled her eyes and blew out her
breath. Well, that was a new expression he'd not seen her use before. He wasn't
sure if he liked her childish behavior or not, but one thing was certain, he
wouldn't be easily dismissed. Baron smirked, and couldn't help but chuckle.
Without speaking, he opened the door and stepped onto the street.
"Good afternoon, ma'am." Baron
nodded his head to the woman. Mischief lit her eyes, and Baron welcomed the
unlikely ally. "Your niece and I are neighbors in Longton. If you will
allow me to introduce myself, my name is Sir Baron Lacey. Ella had dropped her
packages while entering the carriage. Being as she is a friend of the family, I
thought it only proper to keep her company until you were able to join her. I
hope you don't object to my being so forward."
Baron didn't know which woman was more
overwhelmed by what he'd said. Ella's aunt remained silent, but her
appreciation of him or his gallantry was evident in her eyes. Her niece shifted
behind him, most likely, trying to draw her aunt's attention. Having no
intention of allowing Ella the chance to influence the older woman's first
impression of him, he moved to block her view.
"I'm very grateful you were nearby,
Sir Lacey," the older woman said. "I'm Eleanor's Aunt Frances. It's
very nice to meet you. Are you staying in the area or are you passing
through."
"He's passing through, Auntie,"
Ella said in a rush from behind Baron.
Baron quirked a brow, intrigued by Ella's
insistence that he not dally. "My plans are currently undecided," he
said, both in answer to her aunt's question, and as a warning to Ella. He
didn't know why the sudden change in her demeanor toward him, but he liked the
idea of interrupting her game with Payne Crumley.
Aunt Frances smiled over at him, and then
ducked her head and took a seat next to Ella.
"Since you have no firm plans, you
must accompany us to the dance on Saturday? My cousin has invited a few people
to his home as a means to welcome Ella to Windermere."
The coach shifted beside Baron. "No,
Auntie, he can't," Ella quickly added. Her voice squeaked as she spoke.
Both Baron and Frances looked at her with
duplicate, confused expressions.
"What I mean is," Ella started,
and then stopped to clear her throat. "We can't impose our plans on Sir
Lacey. He is most likely in Windermere on business."
"For two beautiful women, I will
change my plans." Baron had never known how intriguing it could be to
irritate someone he didn't plan to extort information from. Yet, something in
the back of his mind niggled at him. He had the odd sense, that extorting
information from Ella Baxter was exactly what he intended to do.
Ella's mouth dropped open, and she stared
at Baron incredulously. She rolled her eyes, leaned back in her seat, and
crossed her arms roughly over her chest. Her bottom lip protruded, and Baron's
smile widened. He didn't realize how much enjoyment could be found with Ella.
Aunt Frances looked from Ella to Baron, and
a slow smile sneaked across her lips. Seemingly pleased with her niece's
discomfort, she clasped her hands together. "Then it's settled. We will
see you on Saturday, Sir Lacey."
Baron chuckled throatily. "You will,
indeed," he agreed.
Baron lifted his chin in the direction of
the satisfied customer. "Is that the one?" he asked the proprietor.
The tavern owner glanced over his shoulder
and then continued to wipe the table where Baron sat. "Um-hmm. His name's
Payne Crumley," he answered. He paused and looked Baron straight in the
eyes. His bloodshot glare indicated the intensity in which he spoke.
"I don't want any trouble in here.
Whatever business you have with him, you take it outside." His voice was
gruff when he spoke.
Baron didn't want any trouble either, from
the tavern keeper or the man's patron. But sometimes, in order to acquire what
was needed, he couldn't always guarantee the safety of the surrounding area.
"I'll see what I can do," Baron said.
Ignoring the man's harsh glare, he grabbed
hold of the whiskey bottle and headed toward the door. He didn't need to be
told how to conduct his business. For years, he'd made good on damage he'd been
responsible for. It hadn't been his preference to remodel one establishment
after another, but his generosity had established a bond with a variety of
people who provided him with sensitive information.
He staggered from side to side and
shuffled his feet as he walked. He'd not had anything to drink, but the man
leaving the whore didn't need to know that. Footsteps neared Baron. He'd timed
his departure well, and his body now blocked the exit. Baron stopped moving and
stared down at the floor. He leaned against the doorframe and jiggled one leg.
"...And good whiskey, too." he
said, his words slurred. He turned to the man behind him, and lifted his knee
toward the stranger. "Milksop, does this smell like booze...?"
"What? Move out of my way,
drunk," the man said. He stepped to his left, and tried to side-step
Baron.
Baron spread his arms from his side,
keeping the man in front of him. "There's no need to call names. I just
asked a question."
The man snarled his lip, and shoved his
hand against Baron.
This was the reaction Baron had hoped for.
Without hesitating, he grabbed his attacker's upper arm, and slammed him into
the wall. His opponent's face crushed against the wood, and the man gasped. Not
giving him time to squirm, Baron shoved his shoulder into the center of the
man's back, pressing his weight hard into him.
Baron waved off the barkeep and positioned
his mouth next to the pinned man's ear. "If you don't like my question,
how about a statement? Another woman is dead, and you're involved, Payne
Crumley."
The man's eyes bulged, and his skin paled.
"How do you know my name?"
"Just know that I found you once, and
I can do it again."
Squirming against the wall, the man looked
as though he struggled to keep control of his bodily functions. "I didn't
kill anyone," the man sneered. He pushed backward against Baron's fist.
Baron wrenched the man's arm behind his
back and yanked his hand up to his hairline. "No? But you know where I can
find the man who did. Where is he?"
"I don't know what you're talking
about."
"I think you do, and I'll ask again.
Where is Lacey Macey?" Baron cringed at the use of the name. He'd never
get used to connecting his name with that of the killer.
Baron had been warned he wasn't likely to
get any cooperation from the man. But this was his only lead, and he couldn't
risk another woman being attacked. He yanked his dagger into the open with his
free hand, and held the blade near the wall.
"I have a theory. Would you like to
hear it, Crumley?" He didn't wait for an answer. "If the murderer can
escape the hangman, he might stop killing innocent women."
"You don't know that. Maybe he'll see
himself as invincible and kill even more. He is mad, after all."
"Yes, he is," Baron agreed. The
thought of freeing a murderer was the last thing on his mind, and he had no
intention of letting a madman run loose. His theory was only a means to loosen
Crumley's tongue.
No one needed to remind him of the mental
state of a murderer. Baron had witnessed the carnage first hand. What had
prevented him from reporting what he knew to the authorities was the madman's
identity. The king would do anything to protect his son. Baron turned his
dagger in his hand. Light played along the sharp edge of the blade, sliding
from hilt to tip.
"You've been in the same town as
every woman who's been murdered. It should be fairly easy to convince a judge
you're a murderer."
Crumley's eyes widened further. "That
means nothing. I didn't kill anyone. Didn't you hear me?"
Baron leaned in close to the man's face.
In his mind, he played his final card in a winner take all poker game.
Everything both men owned lay on the table in full view. A game of this
magnitude took skill and courage. Baron may not have a winning hand, but at
least he had his wits to rely on.
"You have to remember," Baron
said, his voice heavy. "Your arrest will stop future murders."
Baron didn't believe the logic to his
words anymore now then when he'd come up with the idea. Still, he was certain
that Payne Crumley knew more than he was willing to share. He'd most likely be
unwilling to tell Baron what he knew, but Baron's aggression might be the
motivation the man needed to expose the killer. If Crumley knew where the
murderer was, chances were, he would warn Macey about Baron. And if Crumley,
like Baron, meant to bring Macey to justice, he might tell Baron what he knew
in a means to escape being arrested for a crime he didn't commit. Either way,
Payne Crumley wasn't leaving without Baron gaining an advantage over Macey.
"I told you to take your business
outside. I'll not have my place busted up," the tavern keeper shouted from
the upstairs balcony.
The business owner's shout was all the
distraction Crumley needed. Shoving his chest away from the wall, he knocked
Baron to the ground, and then raced out the door. Baron fell backward, landing
hard on the floor. He cursed under his breath, but shot to his feet. He'd
bluffed about going to the magistrate, but he couldn't let this man get away
now. His source of information had been adamant that Payne Crumley knew where
to find the murderer.
Bursting through the door, both men raced
into the back alleys and onto the main street. A white shirt billowed in front
of Baron as Crumley weaved his way past several street merchants. A small boy
ran in front of them, breaking the fugitive's stride. Baron closed the distance
between them and reached for the fleeing man's shirt collar. Crumley rounded
the corner, and instead of grabbing cloth, air filled Baron's grasp. He'd
almost had hold of him, and a change of direction had prevented him from
capturing his best chance of bringing a murderer to justice.
The sound of boxes falling to the ground
brought both men up short, and Baron skidded to a stop. He bent forward, his
lungs burning. He could hardly confront the man in front of witnesses. Besides,
from the sound of the commotion, Crumley had crashed into someone who'd had
their hands full. Baron doubted someone would let Crumley race off without
restacking what he'd destroyed.
"What did you call me?" a
feminine voice asked.
Baron's body clenched, and he jerked his
head in the direction of her question.
"Lady Ella," a man said. Crumley
panted as hard as Baron.
Baron inched toward the edge of the
building. He thought he recognized the voice of the woman who'd spoken, but it
was impossible that Ella Baxter was here. She lived in Longton and never
ventured from her home any further than the distance it took to travel to
nearby neighbors. He'd even nicknamed her Mouse because of her meek demeanor.
Pressing himself against the wall, he peered around the corner and looked in
the woman's direction.
Dressed in a tan colored, silk gown with
brown lace trim, a brightly faced woman confronted the man Baron had been
chasing. An assortment of boxes littered the ground around their feet. Baron
could stare at her for hours, but he pulled back to keep from being seen. From
what he could tell, this young woman was Ella, but he could only guess as to
what she was doing here.
"I prefer to be addressed as Lady
Eleanor," she said.
She spoke with an assertiveness he'd never
heard her use before. She'd told Crumley to call her Lady Eleanor. Baron
smiled. He'd always called her Ella, and she'd never objected to his use of the
nickname.
Crumley helped Ella into her coach and
then loaded her packages, one item at a time, in with her. The boxes were small
and could easily be stacked in one pile. Why did he take such care to lift them
individually? Once the last parcel was inside the coach, Crumley took an
extraordinarily long time to take his leave. After a long minute, he closed the
door and disappeared down the street.
Baron waited, debating if he should follow
after him or say hello to Ella. She and Crumley had tried to appear as though
they were strangers. Passersby had not seemed to question the meeting. But for
someone whose life depended on adequately interpreting other people's actions,
not to mention, who also knew Ella, there was more to this unexpected meeting
than one might think. With his decision made, Baron walked up to the coach and
pulled the closed door open.
"We have nothing left to discuss.
I'll meet you on Saturday," Ella said.
"And where shall we meet?" Baron
asked.
Clutching her hands to her chest, Ella
jumped in her seat. Blood drained from her face, and her mouth fell open. He
could hear her heart pounding from where she sat.
"Baron! You recov…Why are you…how did
you…" she said, her eyes darted nervously past him to the street.
"It's good to see you, too,
Ella," he said. Without waiting for an invitation, he climbed into the
coach with her.
Again, her gaze swept the street.
"What are you doing? You can't be here…alone…with me. We have no
chaperone."
She had always been proper and
conservative in her manner, but there was something different about her today.
The dreamy-eyed stare he was used to seeing was missing. Instead of hanging
onto his every word as he'd known her to do, she looked appalled to see him.
Did she expect Crumley to return, or did she indeed look for a chaperone?
"You need to leave, Sir Lacey. My
aunt will be here momentarily."
Five years her elder, Baron had never
thought much of how interested she was in him, but he disliked being dismissed
like an unwanted houseguest.
"Have I done something to offend you,
Lady Ella?" he asked, deliberately using his nickname for her.
Her lip twitched and her cheeks reddened,
but she didn't correct him about the use of her name. "As I said, my
aunt—"
"Eleanor, dear, please open the door.
My hands are full," an older woman said from outside the coach.
Ella rolled her eyes and blew out her
breath. Well, that was a new expression he'd not seen her use before. He wasn't
sure if he liked her childish behavior or not, but one thing was certain, he
wouldn't be easily dismissed. Baron smirked, and couldn't help but chuckle.
Without speaking, he opened the door and stepped onto the street.
"Good afternoon, ma'am." Baron
nodded his head to the woman. Mischief lit her eyes, and Baron welcomed the
unlikely ally. "Your niece and I are neighbors in Longton. If you will
allow me to introduce myself, my name is Sir Baron Lacey. Ella had dropped her
packages while entering the carriage. Being as she is a friend of the family, I
thought it only proper to keep her company until you were able to join her. I
hope you don't object to my being so forward."
Baron didn't know which woman was more
overwhelmed by what he'd said. Ella's aunt remained silent, but her
appreciation of him or his gallantry was evident in her eyes. Her niece shifted
behind him, most likely, trying to draw her aunt's attention. Having no
intention of allowing Ella the chance to influence the older woman's first
impression of him, he moved to block her view.
"I'm very grateful you were nearby,
Sir Lacey," the older woman said. "I'm Eleanor's Aunt Frances. It's
very nice to meet you. Are you staying in the area or are you passing
through."
"He's passing through, Auntie,"
Ella said in a rush from behind Baron.
Baron quirked a brow, intrigued by Ella's
insistence that he not dally. "My plans are currently undecided," he
said, both in answer to her aunt's question, and as a warning to Ella. He
didn't know why the sudden change in her demeanor toward him, but he liked the
idea of interrupting her game with Payne Crumley.
Aunt Frances smiled over at him, and then
ducked her head and took a seat next to Ella.
"Since you have no firm plans, you
must accompany us to the dance on Saturday? My cousin has invited a few people
to his home as a means to welcome Ella to Windermere."
The coach shifted beside Baron. "No,
Auntie, he can't," Ella quickly added. Her voice squeaked as she spoke.
Both Baron and Frances looked at her with
duplicate, confused expressions.
"What I mean is," Ella started,
and then stopped to clear her throat. "We can't impose our plans on Sir
Lacey. He is most likely in Windermere on business."
"For two beautiful women, I will
change my plans." Baron had never known how intriguing it could be to
irritate someone he didn't plan to extort information from. Yet, something in
the back of his mind niggled at him. He had the odd sense, that extorting
information from Ella Baxter was exactly what he intended to do.
Ella's mouth dropped open, and she stared
at Baron incredulously. She rolled her eyes, leaned back in her seat, and
crossed her arms roughly over her chest. Her bottom lip protruded, and Baron's
smile widened. He didn't realize how much enjoyment could be found with Ella.
Aunt Frances looked from Ella to Baron, and
a slow smile sneaked across her lips. Seemingly pleased with her niece's
discomfort, she clasped her hands together. "Then it's settled. We will
see you on Saturday, Sir Lacey."
Baron chuckled throatily. "You will,
indeed," he agreed.
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MEET CAROL:
As a youth, I loved reading Trixie Belden books. She was great—smart, witty, and surrounded by good-looking guys. What’s not to like? While in my teens, I discovered the answers to that question when I heard someone mention a romance novel she had read. Her shallow breathing and flushed face was enough to pique my interest. A trip to the bookstore was in order. I read with wide-eyed amazement. Trixie never spoke of such occurrences!
Other than the obvious, I found myself trying to appreciate what my friend had enjoyed about this book. Yeah, there was the hot guy and beautiful woman, but the book as a whole frustrated me. Why did it take 380 pages for the couple to admit they loved each other? To me, this is where the story began. Much to my sadness, I found this to be the writing norm.
I was determined to find an author who felt as I did. This is how I discovered Kathleen Woodiwiss. Yes! Someone who could tell a story with the two main characters committed to each other before the final pages. Needless to say, she became a favorite soon followed by Diana Gabaldon.
I hope to follow in both of these ladies’ examples and combine history and romance throughout the entire story.
MEET CAROL:
As a youth, I loved reading Trixie Belden books. She was great—smart, witty, and surrounded by good-looking guys. What’s not to like? While in my teens, I discovered the answers to that question when I heard someone mention a romance novel she had read. Her shallow breathing and flushed face was enough to pique my interest. A trip to the bookstore was in order. I read with wide-eyed amazement. Trixie never spoke of such occurrences!
Other than the obvious, I found myself trying to appreciate what my friend had enjoyed about this book. Yeah, there was the hot guy and beautiful woman, but the book as a whole frustrated me. Why did it take 380 pages for the couple to admit they loved each other? To me, this is where the story began. Much to my sadness, I found this to be the writing norm.
I was determined to find an author who felt as I did. This is how I discovered Kathleen Woodiwiss. Yes! Someone who could tell a story with the two main characters committed to each other before the final pages. Needless to say, she became a favorite soon followed by Diana Gabaldon.
I hope to follow in both of these ladies’ examples and combine history and romance throughout the entire story.
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Love that the author wrote what she knew but also didn't let that hold her back in any way. Lovely guest post!
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DeleteI have heard that saying a lot: write what you know. Good to know it didn't prevent the author from researching something new! :)
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DeleteI always wondered just how that worked the write what you know. If I wrote only what I knew it would be pretty limited. ;)
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Me too Sophia Rose ;-)
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DeleteGreat post on writing what you know but not limiting yourself. I love a good rogue and a Scottish one to boot..yum!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim!
DeleteI love the history and knowledge about the past era also the gowns and balls and in highlander novels I love their brawniness brogue and body men in kilts drives me nuts
ReplyDeleteThanks Natasha and men in kilts does that for me too!
DeleteWrite what you enjoy is great advice. I never really liked the write what you know line of thought. This one looks pretty great!
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