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Paula, I mean P J take it away!
Hearing Voices
I wanted to talk a bit about something that I
think causes a lot of soul-searching and self-doubt and possibly even panic
among writers, particularly when they are starting out. This is the matter of
the author’s voice.
First things first, let me tell you I never
think of myself as an author, always a writer. Author sounds a little
pretentious to me. It also, perhaps wrongly, makes me feel a little restricted.
After all, don’t we usually
think of authors writing fiction, and most probably literary fiction? Somehow a
writer gets more freedom - I’ve written
non-fiction, short stories, commercial fiction and screenplays. So, straight
off, I’m resisting the
‘author’ part of the author’s voice already. And don’t get me started on the ‘authorial voice’! That term
should be dropped right now.
So, let’s call it the writer’s voice instead. That makes me a bit
more comfortable. And yet…. Anyone who
has been to a writing workshop, taken a writing course, or studied creative
writing at college or university will, I’m willing to
bet, have had their wrists slapped at some point or another for letting the
writer’s voice show in
their work. We mustn’t be able to
hear the writer speaking, we are told. Bad writer, bad! Let the characters
speak. Let the story do the work. If you can hear the writer speaking it is
telling-not-showing and self-indulgent and preachy and ruins the illusion of
the story.
OK, so, with our own voices on mute, we go
back to work and make certain we can’t be detected
in those lines, phrases, words. Much better.
But… how many times
(quite possibly on those same courses) have you heard someone say Oh! That writer has really found her voice.
How wonderful! ? She is declared a confident, proper writer. Good
writer, good!
Hmmm.
Of course there are lots of contradictory
demands made on the writer: come up with something new/that’s never been done before people might not like it;
fantasy is popular and lucrative, go with that/don’t chase the market, be innovative; write
sympathetic characters/sympathetic characters are too safe; give us short
books/long books; write what you know/know what you write, and so on. Still,
this whole voice thing seems to be at the centre of each one of these other
challenges. After all, it is fundamental to the way the book sounds (and no, I’m not talking audio books here). It is crucial to
the way the reader hears it in her head. What could be more crucial to how your
story is received?
Well, I’m here to tell
you that, I’m sorry, but I
don’t believe the writer’s voice exists. There, I’ve said it. I don’t expect everyone to agree with me, but I’m being honest with you here. No Santa Claus. No
Big Foot. No Tooth Fairy. No writer’s voice. OK, I’m willing to be persuaded on the Tooth Fairy, but
the writer’s voice? No.
Here’s how I see it.
Writers have a style, which is a conscious
choice, a manner in which they write that they have decided best puts across
their ideas and stories. This style can be influenced by a number of things,
genre, trends, and other writers, to name a few. So, for example, when I am
writing my historical-fantasy books about witches, (The Witch’s Daughter, The
Silver Witch, et al) I use a style that I believe best suits those
stories. Although they are all stand alone books, it is a series, and so I aim
to keep the style coherent, consistent, recognisable. When I am writing my
crime-fantasy-comic novels (Gretel and
the Case of the Missing Frog Prints, Once Upon A Crime, etc) I employ a
different style. A style that I judge best puts across the tone and setting of
the tale.
And then there are the characters. For me,
every story begins with its main character. These fictional people do not feel
very fictional to me at all when they pop unbidden into my head and begin to
make themselves known to me. It is their
voice you hear in the story, not mine. Ah-ha!
I hear you cry, That’s all well and good when you are writing in the
first person, but what about using the third person? Surely the ‘narrator’ doesn’t speak in the character’s voice?
I’ll admit, it is
easier, or maybe just purer, cleaner, more direct, to have things expressed
through the first person viewpoint, which is why I use it a lot. But third
person can be equally, well, personal. I use a close-up, subjective third
person that permits access to the thoughts and feelings of the main character,
so the difference in viewpoints is very slight. And if I’ve done my job properly, you shouldn’t even notice first person/third person. (Unless
you are a writer and like to dismantle everything you read to see how it works.
In which case well done you and poor you at the same time, as that is darn hard
work.)
And even if you go for a distinct narrator
who is not a character in the book (and this technique is really quite rare) I
still maintain that you are speaking then with the voice of the narrator, not
the writer. And that narrator is in fact… a character.
And if you don’t think this is possible, I challenge you to take a
passage from one of my witchy books and another from one of my Detective Gretel
books and show me where my author’s voice is? I
don’t think it would be possible to tell
the books were even written by the same person.
And that is such a liberating thought, isn’t it? We can write different things, differently,
in different ways. After all, that is, for me, one of the main attractions of
being a writer: to inhabit different worlds as a different person. Why would I
want to limit myself to doing it all in one way of speaking, one way of
telling?
D’you see? D’you see how this might actually be true? And might
you, the new writer, feel hugely relieved to discover that you don’t have to hide/find your writer’s voice? You just have to write in keeping with your story. Stay true
to the style you have chosen, make your character’s voice authentic and consistent and distinct, and
the illusion of your story, of the fictional world you have created, will be
maintained.
And you won’t have to tie yourself in knots about hearing or
not hearing voices. Now that’s something for
a writer to shout about, don’t you think?
Here is Paula's image of Gretel
MEET PJ:
Paula Brackston (aka PJ Brackston)is the New York Times bestselling author of The Witch's Daughter, The Winter Witch, and The Midnight Witch(2014).
Paula has an MA in Creative Writing from Lancaster University, and is a Visiting Lecturer for the University of Wales, Newport. In 2007 Paula was short listed in the Creme de la Crime search for new writers. In 2010 her book 'Nutters' (writing as PJ Davy) was short listed for the Mind Book Award, and she was selected by the BBC under their New Welsh Writers scheme.
Paula lives in Wales with her partner and their two children.
Paula Brackston (aka PJ Brackston)is the New York Times bestselling author of The Witch's Daughter, The Winter Witch, and The Midnight Witch(2014).
Paula has an MA in Creative Writing from Lancaster University, and is a Visiting Lecturer for the University of Wales, Newport. In 2007 Paula was short listed in the Creme de la Crime search for new writers. In 2010 her book 'Nutters' (writing as PJ Davy) was short listed for the Mind Book Award, and she was selected by the BBC under their New Welsh Writers scheme.
Paula lives in Wales with her partner and their two children.
My Reviews
The Case of The Missing Frog Prints
P.J. Brackston’s new Brother’s Grimm Mystery series debut novel is a Cozy-Noir,
comical and fanciful tale starring some of our childhood fairytale heroes and
heroines only all grown up. Using humor plus a playful, sarcastic and witty
narrative readers are treated to her one of a kind brilliant storytelling style
which brings to life this fantastical story that showcases her charming,
offbeat and often whimsical characters and her fantastic fairytale-fitting
backdrops. Her amazing imaginary world construction and the dynamics between her
siblings, plus introducing the world to the next great woman PI is phenomenal.
I’ve loved all of Paula Brackston’s works and will continue to and now I’ll be anxiously awaiting more from her evil twin P.J.
Brackston too!
Gesternstadt’s town cop, Kapitan Strudel who upon learning of yet another untimely death will no doubt want Gretel behind bars, not sleuthing, and Gretel loving the finer things needs this case to stock her coffers. Hansel is all too happy to help when he realizes their visit coincides with Nuremberg’s Uber Weisswurstfest and he’ll not only get to taste great food but also be able to reconnect with his school chum, Wolfie.
Knee deep in danger and hot on the trail of the thief, Gretel with the help of some highly unusual assistants plus Hansel and Wolfie is hopeful that she will solve this puzzling mystery
Once Upon A Crime
Once Upon A Crime is the second in P J Brackston’s new dark comedic crime drama series, a prequel to book
one, Gretel and the Case of the Missing Frog Prints. Her twisting, turning,
nail-biting storyline is once again a mix of ribald and gallows humor that
features idyllic fairytale settings with a definite sinister side, interspersed
with a melding of Sherlock and Pink Panther crime solving. Her stars, the
irrepressible, über-curvaceous, self-serving Gretel and her humble, addled big
brother sidekick rule every page as do her amazing townsfolk and fantastical
co-stars.
I have enjoyed all the writings of Paula Brackston and am loving her new incarnation as P.J. where with her unique imagination she once again leaves me in awe.
I have enjoyed all the writings of Paula Brackston and am loving her new incarnation as P.J. where with her unique imagination she once again leaves me in awe.
Once upon a time in Bavaria, Gretel (yes that Gretel) lived
in a village called Gesternstadt earning her keep as a private detective with
her brother Hansel (yes that Hansel) as her befuddled assistant. Her current
case of the missing kitties has gotten her once again on the wrong side of the
law. She’s trying to avoid all the kingsmen,
and the machinations of the royals, all the while hoping to keep her
considerable self out of trouble so she can solve the case and fill her quickly
emptying coffers. While executing her superior (to her anyway) method of sleuthing
she encounters murder and mayhem leaving her with more questions than answers
and she must do some quick thinking to keep herself and Hans out of the
clutches of the good guys and the bad guys so she can find and return the
absconded felines to their grieving owner.
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This is completely new to me so thanks so much for putting it on my radar!
ReplyDeleteYou're totally welcome :)
DeleteLoved this info on writing and found it really interesting. While I don't normally read YA, these two books sound like they would be fun, and the titles are totally catchy! Hugs...Ro
ReplyDeleteRo thanks for stopping by and these are not YA they are adult, in fact they're more noir than cozy and at time dark reads.
DeleteI haven't read Paula as PJ, but I love the premise! Thanks for the heads up about these mysteries and the chance to win!
ReplyDeleteYour welcome holdenj ;)
Deletegood luck
I can't wait to read these new books. I have read The Witch's Daughter and I lobed it.
ReplyDeleteHi Candace, you know The Witch's Daughter is the only Paula Brackston book I haven't read. Thanks for stopping by, if I'm not mistaken you're a first time visitor.
DeleteGreat points! I think that's why a lot of indie writers have succeeded in recent years because people have tired of the "formula" and enjoyed books that just felt sincere and transcended the pages.
ReplyDeleteI so agree Braine. Have a great day!
DeleteI love that these are a little darker than cozy..right up my alley!
ReplyDeleteI know Kim, I was happily surprised by it when I read the first one. And what really surprised me was how unique her well I can't say voice was, LOL but her storytelling style from her other witchy novels. Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteThis author is talented and creative. I read and enjoyed The Witch;s Daughter. Thanks for this great feature and wonderful giveaway. saubleb(at)gmail(dot)com
ReplyDeleteHi traveler, glad you've enjoyed Paula in the past. Good Luck!
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